Critics on Week 2 Presentation

Link to Video:
http://youtu.be/vPDk38UtVtQ

On team:
It was in overall a pretty poor performance that we showed. 
1. We lacked synchronization
2. Some of us spoke too softly
3. There was a serious lack of co-ordination among us
4. The message we wanted to transmit was not clear enough!

The positive points for the presentation are:
1. The idea was a great idea. Even Mrs.Gobin admitted it. 
2. The use of the music was a very good addition to the presentation. It created the sad atmosphere during the presentation and added some tension to the room. 
3. Some of us had improved on personal level (Pointed out by Mrs.Gobin) which is a positive factor and nice encouragement
4. We are still not using any piece of paper as a help

On personal level:
I was pretty not confident on the topic. I stumbled a few instances because I forgot some of my text during the presentation. Another thing that had an effect on the presentation is the hardware failures at the start, which put us all in a nervous state of mind. Like previously, I had this difficulty in pronouncing properly sometimes. Also, as 1 of the senior students pointed out, I have this tendency of playing with my nose when I'm nervous, which gives bad impression to the audience.

Note: We are going to work out the best on the negative points of the presentation and give our best for the coming one!