Name: Satveer Bhantoo
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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7JfmZ0qLCtrJ1FQ6aXczYA/videos
The team in general
Starting with the positive points; in my opinion it was a good first attempt. We did not use any additional aid such as Paper or notes during the presentation. Also, we had much less difficulty with memorizing the key aspects of the sketch that we actually expected.
Things we need to work on a lot include our body languages and our presence in the presentation. We did not have the audience's attention during the sketch because of many reasons. Firstly, we were talking to softly, the dialogues (the way they were written) weren't very interesting and I think we somewhat lost the audience's attention at some point.
Most importantly, we lacked co-ordination and the plot a bit messy!
Next time we will do our best to improve on these points as a team!
Criticism (on personal level)
Positive: I wasn't as bad as I expected I would be. I spoke as loud as I could as an attempt to show self-confidence. I tried to cover up my teammate who was in a lot of trouble with the speech so that the presentation doesn't go in an awkward silence. Indeed, writing "No to prejudice" on the board was not planned, it was actually improvised.
Negative points: I had some problems with my pronunciation and was not speaking fluently enough. I was making too many hand gestures, maybe out of nervousness. There were many instances where I forgot what I was about to say, and lastly, forgetting (again out of nervousness) a team-member name.
Kind regards,
Satveer
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